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Wednesday 31 July 2019

The future

Kia ora bloggers!,
Today I am going to be posting about my future story that I wrote. It is about two people that I made up that are in the future, and about what they see. It is just a short story but I think you will like it I mean I can't guarantee that but I think you will.
(Just a heads up it's only three hundred words long, and not exactly finished)
I took me about 30 minutes to complete the story hope you like it!

The story
Max enters the future and look around he sees buildings that tilt sideways cars that hover above the ground and that have no wheels you smell something you have never smelled before it’s a mix of chocolate and raspberry. He think to enter a cafe of do something fun, Max choses fun so he thinks of what might people do for fun in the future. The future makes him think about Doctor. Who, he starts to jog and then slowly sped up he sees a fashion store and he sees his friend that went missing he sprints towards him and touches his shoulder his friend turns around “Max”he asks “is that really you Jack?” “how did you know, I’ve been here all along because I just wanted to get away from all the stupid stuff back home and then this guy just offered me a new life so I took it and he said he was happy for me” “same”I replied “do you wana do something fun”Jack asked “ yeah” I replied a little shocked at how happy he was in this futuristic world. 

15 minutes later Jack was telling me about what was new and what’s changed but one of the things that really caught me was that the materials that the buildings were made of repairs itself so if there is a crack in a wall or something then the building repairs itself. We went to an amusement park and it was totally amazing and the rides were so sweet. So dangerous but so safe at the same time we went on lots of rides one of them your legs dangle and it feels like there are going to hit the ground and it goes upside down. For one time in so long I was actually happy.

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