Massive Zoo Escape News paper report feedback

Hi, guys, I've made up a story that Is a Zoo escape
here's the link and It's also a news report.
 I personally think It Is pretty cool so you should gocheck it out. Hope you like It please read. oh yea and
this is some things you need in a Newspaper report

• Alliteration or a Pun in the title
• Columns 
• Lots of words 
• Third person
• Description 
• Puns
• Rhyming
• Paragraphs
• Enthusiasm
• Quote
• Past tense

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math work

hi guys and girls I am going to tell you about
 some measurement work I did.
it was pretty fun I like doing measurement 
work I hope we get to do it again.
we mostly did cm m km but I still liked it.
measurement is awesome you should do
some in your spare time.

Woodend camp

Hi guys last week I went to the woodend christian camp with the year fives and sixes it was awesome there were go-carts and other awesome awesome things I will tell you what we did before we left to go on the bus we had camp booklets we had to agree to some rules and see who else was in our cabin after we had done that we were allowed to decorate our booklets now I will show the photos

This is a tiny bit of woodend also were our bunk rooms are the main hall and the kitchen my dad came and he was serving the food most of the time. 

there's me on the go-cart it was awesome and I went super fast

this is when we had to make a costume out of newsprint paper we were going for a medieval

 DARK NIGHT warrior kinda thing it did go well but not as good as we thought but kade did a dance and that got everyone laughing so that's it for today I will show you some more things next time 

thanks for reading