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Friday 21 June 2019

My animal enclosure

Kia ora bloggers!,
Today I am going to be posting about my animal enclosure that I created. I am still working on the publishing but when I finish it I will blog about it. The hardest part was to not make it in 1st person because I had to do the story in 3rd person and try to make it sound like your not selling it. The easy part was writing all the information down.

The green is what I did in my improvement.

  1. create a design
  2. plan
  3. write
  4. edit and improve
  5. publish
  6. brag about how good it is
(don't do number six)
Plz leave a comment

My animal enclosure
Intro
This product was made at yaldhurst model school by two year sixes. The fish briefcase is a
multi use fish tank made of see through fiberglass and other things of the owners choice.
It can also be used as a normal briefcase but don't put anything valuable in there otherwise
someone might steal something. The product is a fish briefcase for any types of small fish
(no fish bigger than 10/15 cm)
It is designed for efficiency.
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Style
It can come in any design it also has a feeding hole and a castle/house it has a feeding hole
and this helps
empty it and feed the fish(if needed you can open it fully like a real briefcase).
It’s has a castle/house this is where the fish sleeps it is dark except a very dim light inside
so then the fish can see when it swims around inside.


Price
The fish briefcase can come in any design it can be chosen and can come with a castle a car a
mini cabin or anything like that (there is a massive range of things to choose from).
The price of a fish briefcase can usually ranges from $80 to $130 because you can get it in
small sizes to large sizes. You can have whatever you want in the briefcase like a castle
or a mini tree or a car, and it will last a long time because it is an investment and to add
something that makes it even better it can’t break.


Enhancement of Life for the animal
The fish that will inhabit this will live in a calm space and can also enjoy the peacefulness of
noise canceling fiberglass It is also comfortable.
It is an improvement from most normal fish tanks/aquariums because it is efficient and can come
in any shape of size the owner desires. The owner of the fish briefcase can also put whatever
they want in it(maybe they will know what kind of habitat the fish likes).


Materials
The briefcase itself is made of see through fiberglass(so it is strong and does not break under
the pressure of the water). It has sand above stones at the bottom(the stones are for look and
the sand is for comfort). If you get a castle it is made out of mini stone bricks(so is has a strong
structure and does not tip over). There are a few big strands of seaweed(to make the fish feel
like they are closer to the sea).


Conclusion

The fish briefcase is a very helpful thing with all the choices you can make with it like
choosing what is inside and what the size is and how you can change it. It is a very
efficient fish tank because of its qualities and its comfort for the fish (like the sand).

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