The story that I wrote was like the story of Wonder the
movie or the book you've probably heard of it.
Anyway, this is my story
Story: THE FIND
Hi my name is Max and I go to Branton middle school I’m a loser well that’s what people say. I’m not that different to other people because I do the same things other people do the only thing that isn't normal about me is my face I’ve had a lot of surgeries some of them even made me look better. I have two awesome parents an amazing sister and the coolest dog on the planet. My hobbies are video games, playing with my dad, basketball and some other things.
At school I have one friend that understands me his name is Jack but people call him by his first and last name Jack Will. You could say he was my protector from the galactic emperials/the bullies. but one day I walked home with Jack Will he was staying for a sleepover because it was a Friday.
On the way to my house the bullies came out of nowhere and they started to chase me and Jack Will. We ran and ran an alley popped up on the street sweett. As we were sprinting we had to dodge and weave through people we had lost the bullies by the time we snuck in the alley.
When we got to my house we found my dog Daisy lying on the ground with some blood around her we turned her over and there was a giant cut across her side. I stood there crying until my dad got home I ran to him in sadness as Jack Will said sorry my dad understood. My dad tidied up the blood and put Daisy on the table then wrapped her up in blankets. He then cheered me and Jack up by playing Minecraft with us.
When we were playing Minecraft we heard a yelp we were up in less than a millisecond. We found Daisy breathing we gently placed a big white bandage on her cut. The next day my mum and my sister were coming home we didn’t want to tell them about it on their holiday. It would have ruined their holiday. That day someone came into the house and tried to steal Daisy instead of killing her. But my dad was there he caught the bad man and then the horrible man went to jail for 10 years.
THE END
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